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no worries, i’ll take a long and rambly response any day. i think there’s a lot of potential for this thematically (as well as mechanically) that’s being limited by the sources you’ve copied from. i’m really interested in the theming of the subrace, but i’m not coming from a place where ik about the specifics of what an oak, or pine dragonborn  means. there’s a lot of space for improvement here. it really just depends on what your goals are for the brew. There’s another spell check right below the previous one. “Breath” instead of “when you use your reath weapon”.

idk how attached your are to the “creating your character” page, but i don’t think it’s needed. For creature type: what prereq’s need to be considered dragonborn?  Think about renaming the Arboreal Ancestry ability names to be something thematic of their nature, as opposed to just their arboreal type. Give more flavor. Does pine mean to have the DC base as 3? For breath weapon it should be arboreal instead of “Your arborieal ancestry…”. What’s the utility behind the increases damage levels for dragons breath? I saw it skimming through the subraces in the dragonbornomicon, but there didn’t seem to be any rhyme or reason why it was added to some and not others.